As it stands here, the point of view could be interpreted incorrectly or at least be a little confusing. I'll post the revised rough image once it has been realized...
Also, CAN YOU SAY "SCHMUCKS" IN A PICTURE BOOK (for 4-8 year olds)? Is there any better (funnier??) words that would fit? I've dabbled with "dweebs" but it might not sound as good in the given sentence (which is also the title, tentatively) as well.
Ideas??
2 comments:
Hey dude.
Great stuff as usual, although I wouldn't say schmuck
cause its yiddish for dick:) so is putz, schmeckle etc..
Here are a few good alternatives...
Dorks, Tools, (also mean dick so maybe not so good) maybe chumps?
Great post! I'd say create your own word. Make it yours and give it meaning. I never heard of the word YOINKS before Scooby Doo,..but now we all know what that means. RUN!!! MONSTER!!
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