did the finished line drawing only to realize i need to rework the entire page layout to better accommodate the type.
As it stands here, the point of view could be interpreted incorrectly or at least be a little confusing. I'll post the revised rough image once it has been realized...
Also, CAN YOU SAY "SCHMUCKS" IN A PICTURE BOOK (for 4-8 year olds)? Is there any better (funnier??) words that would fit? I've dabbled with "dweebs" but it might not sound as good in the given sentence (which is also the title, tentatively) as well.